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"Imagine trying to put a puzzle together without being able to look at the pieces. Impossible, huh? But this is similar to the problem many college students face when tackling organization in their papers. These students might be visual or kinesthetic learners who thrive on hands-on learning methods, but they are expected to 'fit the mold' when it comes to traditional ways of organizing their thoughts on paper. Sometimes it helps visual and kinesthetic learners to see their papers as an actual puzzle that needs to be put together correctly. Materials
needed: First, discuss
with the students the three or four main points they are trying to address
in their papers. After these working thesis points are established, take
a deep breath, and arm the students with scissors. Have them cut up their
papers, separating each idea or sentence into a single unit. This may
seem foreign to them at first, but assure them that they are only "destroying"
a copy and that initial "destruction" is what they are looking
for. Next, ask students to make different piles of sentences or ideas
according to the main points that they support in their thesis. Most likely,
they will also have a pile of information that does not "fit"
the groupings. In revision, they might decide that these sentences don't
support their thesis and should be revised out of the paper. A cut and paste activity using a preselected essay: Bertrand Russell's "Three Passions Have I" From "Organization:
Using Elementary Strategies in a College-Level Writing Center" written
and prepared by the Woodbridge Campus Writing Center of Lori Leeker, Carla
Abraham, Stephanie Mueller, Genny Marsh, and Sarah Potter with Brenda
Mesiel, Writing Center Facilitator. Contact Brenda Meisel or the Woodbridge
Campus Writing Center for more information. |